Friday, March 5, 2010

Word Count Matters

There has been quite a lot of chatter lately on word count, both from agents and editors as well as writers. If you are Stephen King, JK Rowling, etc. this entire conversation is irrelevant. However, for the rest of us mere mortals, word count is important. Paper is expensive. Printing isn't cheap. Shelf space is precious. What's this mean? Simple. Big fat books that aren't guaranteed bestsellers are not high on a publisher's wish list.

Nathan Bransford from Curtis Brown said he's not a stickler for word count, however there are general guidelines. Chuck Sambuchino from Writer's Digest posted a helpful entry on the Guide To Literary Agents blog. Are you curious to know the word count and genre of a book for the YA crowd and younger? Check Renaissance Learning's search engine.

Okay, now on to the bit about why I'm bringing all this up. Let's say you've written a novel. It's awesome. The characters are cool. The plot if phantasmagorical. It's a real page turner. It's an adult mystery novel. It's 200,000 words.

Dear Agent:

I'm seeking representation for my true crime novel, "The Blighter of Bourbon Street". Complete at 200,000 words, it is...

*screeching halt* Agent's eyes bug out, head shakes, and form letter rejection is sent, if you're lucky.


That's too long, especially if you're not an already published best selling author, and even then...

Now it goes both ways. Brilliant true crime novel, with bits of mystery thrown in? 30,000 words? No. Too short. The agent or editor won't get past that part of the query. Really. Truly.

It gets dicier in children's fiction, be it middle grade or young adult, especially when you throw in a genre like fantasy or science fiction. You write an awesomely fantastical 80,000 word fantasy novel. The protagonist is thirteen, and most of the kids around him are middle schoolers or early high school. There's no thought of sex, drugs, driving, proms, college, and whatever else those crazy teenagers get up to nowadays. :-)

It's Middle Grade. It's too long. Fantasy? Sci Fi? Still too long. Probably two times too long. But what about the first Harry Potter book? She wasn't famous then. What about the Percy Jackson books? What about Inkheart for pete's sake!!!!

They are exceptions. Well known exceptions, certainly, but they are exceptions. So ask yourself this. Will you hang your hat on finding the agent or publisher who doesn't care about word count? Or do you want to give yourself the best chance of finding representation and publication? It's your book. It's your vision and dream. Nobody can tell you what you should do but yourself.

Word count matters. We don't have to like it, but it matters.

9 comments:

  1. Great blog here. I agree with Adam. I heard that even for YA SF/F is good around 80K. (between 65K and 85K) Adult SF/F gets up from 85K to 100K for first time publishing and 120K for epics and repeat publishing.

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  2. My middle grade novel is around the 80k mark. It used to be over 120.

    Like you said, many new authors have churned out books with a similar word count.

    I don't intend to shorten mine again. Will keep hoping someone will think it good enough to publish just the way it is.

    Very good post :)

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  3. haha!! Man! This brings me back to the days when Truth Teller and The Wrath of Siren were originally one book. A middle grade fantasy novel weighing in at a massive 125,000 words...lol...

    Now TT is 35,000, a nice figure for a first novel for the younger reader, and I'm taking a gamble on Wrath at 80k, hoping the first one sells enough to justify it's bigger brother.

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  4. Adam and Harley - yes, YA fantasy/sci-fi at 80k is not considered "shocking". It's middle grade fantasy/sci-fi where 80k is often too high.

    Wendy - I faced a similar situation, although I cut from 98k to 81k, and still... I wound up splitting it in two, and adding more "story" to the first part to make it stand a bit more on its own.

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  5. My first published book, a middle-grade fantasy was 334 pages which is definitely long, and longer after working with an editor than it was when I first submitted it. Maybe because it was a small indie press, they were more flexible. I don't know.
    I do know that when I tried to shop a stand-alone, which used the same characters and came in at about 110,000 words, elsewhere I hit a brick wall, although no one (neither agents nor publishers) said it was too long. I have heard that if you are writing a series and the first one is long and published then it's ok to come with a second that is also lengthy, however it didn't work out for me...
    My YAs have both been around 60-70K and I know my editor on one of them wants me to flesh it out a bit. I aim for around that number but allow myself some leeway.

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  6. Thanks, Jo. That's really interesting. I'm aiming for about 55k with Mythos (it's YA fantasy, as opposed to MG), but I think I'll wind up at about 60k.

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  7. Jay, great, great post! I was swamped all day, but I read it!! Thank you for bringing up this topic!!!

    This is the topic that most writers ask about. And I keep telling them to research it. Look around. See what they come up with. My YA/Urban fantasy is 75K because MY research showed that the people I was targeting said that was the max. My adult paranormal thriller is 100K because that's what MY research showed was the absolute max. And, hellooooooo, I'm not write a SHORTER book! Are you NUTS?! LOL!

    But my research and your research arent' the same. Why? Because we're looking at a different target.

    So, very, very good topic and thanks for bringing it up!!

    Frankie

    And, btw, that's Assistant Project Manager Frankie to you! HA! I got a promotion!!!!

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  8. Go, Frankie. Go Frankie. ahem. I mean Go Assistant Project Manager Frankie!

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